Sunday, January 18, 2009

Elevator pitch MPTrax

http://pitches.techcrunch.com/pitch/46-mptrax

This is a quite convenient speech about a website which will link music artists and people organizing every kind of parties. I think the way he introduces himself makes him look a bit too self-confident, but if it's true, it gives him so much credit. He speaks quite fast and is really enthusiastic.

Another pitch related to credit thanks to fame is this one about showmethegolf.tv. I think you should check it too.
http://pitches.techcrunch.com/pitch/173-showmethegolf-tv

Anyways, I think it's a bit dangerous to first talk a lot about yourself instead of the qualities and strengths of your product. Moreover, in such a quick speech, would the investor believe the experiment? It might sound a bit pretentious.

1 comment:

Genzmer said...

I think it's really important to introduce yourself by presenting your own successful projects. However, in the golf pitch, there is just this one little sentence "very successful" at the end of his presentation that is a bit too much...